You have explained why you chose song, and clarified the two strong meanings it has: 1.Work hard 2.Hope for better The music you put in goes with the song, and I think that is important. All the pictures go with the words, and they all had good timing and they were easy to read. I think you have done a good job of your moving image because of the music, words and pictures all fitting in. Something you could have added in was transitions for the slides, so that it looked more finished and organised. Overall there's not much you could have changed and it all goes together.
I think your moving image was pretty good. Sometimes the pictures didn't exactly fit, and maybe you could have used different pictures instead of using the same ones over and over. I think the music went really well with your moving image, and your slides gave you long enough to read. You have also made it very clear about the message which I like
You have explained why you chose song, and clarified the two strong meanings it has:
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2.Hope for better
The music you put in goes with the song, and I think that is important. All the pictures go with the words, and they all had good timing and they were easy to read. I think you have done a good job of your moving image because of the music, words and pictures all fitting in. Something you could have added in was transitions for the slides, so that it looked more finished and organised. Overall there's not much you could have changed and it all goes together.
I think your moving image was pretty good. Sometimes the pictures didn't exactly fit, and maybe you could have used different pictures instead of using the same ones over and over. I think the music went really well with your moving image, and your slides gave you long enough to read. You have also made it very clear about the message which I like
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